Sunday, July 08, 2007

From Uncle Sam's Kitty

So Uncle Sam caught hold of me yesterday-

" Why do u always write fiction-55 with unhappy endings

" Well, er, um I guess I am usually sad when I write them"

"That is no reason- you should be able to switch off and think of variety, Art for Art's Sake"

So Uncle Sam in his great magnamity has shared some of his Fiction -55 pieces , Uncle Sam is unavilable for comments, you can give your comments to me instead-

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He left at 7 - a dark night in Wintry Delhi ..?He had been neglecting studies and acting suspiciously of late - going without notice for hours altogether but this was the limit! Tonight he will be questioned .. As the clock struck 10 and tempers mounted, a familiar voice came on the radio.

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She woke up, startled by the noise of a car driving off – next to her, the bed was empty, left warm by its tenant; she sighed and dozed off; no different from the others she thought.
She woke up, startled by the noise of a car parking …

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She woke up, startled by the noise of a car driving off – next to her, the bed was empty, left warm by its tenant; she tensed – her parents had told her to be careful with guys in the city - and sobbed hopelessly .. until she heard a car parking …

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The noise woke her up; she gathered her slippers and rubbed her eyes - damned rats or the cat after the damned rats. She took her hairbrush and stepped through the kitchen door to see him standing at the stove – making tea. Errr.. I’m sorry I forgot your name from last night.. she blurted

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Don’t push him – he’ll fall .. he shrieked, but Mamma said, not to worry dear, he won’t! But Dad was anxious, the branch his son was on was too tenous and quite high for his age when the inevitable happened

He flapped his wings furiously even as he fell and gained flight

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He kissed everyone just as he had thought, he collected the award with the right pose as the cameras clicked, the thank you speech was a resounding success and he walked back to his seat with elan as if it he received them all his life!! After all 5 rehearsals did count…

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He forgot the kisses he meant to give, he held the statutte too tightly on stage, he fumbled with his speech and went back to his seat thinking - all those preparations from the past 6 years were futile. Such moments deserve their spontaneity.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice ones- who is Uncle Sam BTW

Anonymous said...

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I loved the third-last one! Uncle Sam, some more plizz...how about a seperate blog? Mishi, ask Uncle to come on board 55 fun!

Moushumi said...

@ Jeet- Uncle Sam is my pen name-howzaat:))
He is a old frnd

@ Idea- Thanks Idea, will pass on the message, am sure he is going to walk on clouds for some days now:)

Shreyasi Deb said...

I looooooove Uncle Sam and his plans tooo, I agree with Ideasmith on a separate blog but Mishi, don't backstab and destroy the venture this time, lest the creativity of your friends is challenged!

Moushumi said...

Uncle Sam be damned:)
Et tu shreya??